Hi Sashi,

I did not mean the visual placement, I meant the sounds. I agree that poetry is vocal, but line breaks, as in pauses, are part of teh poetry, I think. It is distracting to have line breaks that appear more random than not, or appear to be there instead of a punctuation mark. Line length in terms of syllables is a general rule-of-thumb I have used in the past and it has helped me a lot.

I will get to the Gulzar. But not if you don't comment on the prose :-) (just joking!)

I just checked out your website - you've got a lot of stuff there - can't get to it now, no matter how many distractions I seek.

Poorvi