First Wind of Autumn
(after DeCamp’s ‘The Blue Kimono’) There is a wind blowing Down the avenue’s gullet A gray wind is blowing Through the black Hair of two little girls swinging From the light poles Is blowing Through their checkered dresses & the creaking shutters of a sky opening And closing over the round Faced sun. Down in the fields A wild wind is blowing Through the legs of men Dribbling a soccer ball, Is blowing Through the shirt sleeves Of kites, oscillating strings Of daydreams & an open window at which a woman in a blue kimono, is sitting And watching Her sockets filled with crushed blue Glass, a wind blowing Through pages of poems Unwritten.
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Bookstore Notes
[1] Absurdity
On a bookstore’s flashy electronic display, names of people born this day, and falling in the following categories: industrialists, sitcom actors, movie stars, pop queens, and fashion models. If you could notice who were not covered – writers, poets, philosophers - those animate ghosts of bookstores –you perhaps have seen the absurdity, moving like a blood clot, to the heart of United States of America
[2] Random lines, understood and not understood, from here and there
Peregrina paloma imaginara Que enardeces los ultimos amores Alma de lut, de musica y de flores Peregrina paloma imaginara – Ricardo Jaimes Freire, a Bolivian poet
Bad is Bach! – Slogan on a t-shirt
Glittergates of elfinbone – James Joyce
[3] Approximately two visual thoughts
An fundamental visual pattern – echoing Borges’s twelve patterns of metaphor in poetry – is the gesture of a woman’s hand playing with her hair, perhaps placing it behind her ear, perhaps letting it fall across her face. Even though he has seen this before, he always experiences a sharp aesthetic pleasure in observing this gesture.
An artist facing a blank sheet of paper with paints and brushes perhaps finds it a little easier to capture a face, with all it planes, angles and curves, that someone facing the same sheet with words.
On seeing a woman’s red hanging earrings, I also see my sister’s first set of earrings, also red and hanging, after her ears were punched some twenty years ago.
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Notes on Borges’s Art of Verse
[1] The Riddle of Poetry
· Poetry, and even books of poetry, is something beyond aesthetic theories
· Whenever I have dipped into books of aesthetics, I have had an uncomfortable feeling that I was reading the works of astronomers who never looked at the stars.
· … books are only occasions for poetry.
· A poem is a book is dead until someone reads it.
· Art happens only when we read a poem
· I must confess that I think a book is not really an immortal object to be picked up and duly worshipped, but rather an occasion for beauty.
· So we needn’t really worry about the fate of ‘classics’?
· Greek: oinopa pontos. English: wine-dark sea.
· Sometimes beauty is also created by how language and the reader simply shift in and with time.
· And at the end of it, poetry is impossible to define in language.
[2] Metaphor
· Every word is a dead metaphor.
· That sentence is a metaphor in itself, and is true in an etymological sense.
· Twelve or so ‘stock patterns’ of metaphors can be identified at work in various poems.
· Chesterton: A monster made of thousand eyes? Night sky
· Stevenson: a mere animal, the color of flowers? A woman
· The effectiveness of Chuan Tzu’s beautiful poem of metaphor – a man dreaming he was a butterfly etc – hinges on the use of butterfly. It would have not been as beautiful if he had used, say a tiger, a whale or a typewriter instead.
· The beauty of Frost’s repetition of the line ‘and miles to go before I sleep’, lies in its allusive use of metaphor. Miles = life. Sleep = death.
· Some metaphors, like the Anglo Saxon kenning – sea = whale road – cannot be traced back to one of the stock patterns of metaphor.
to be completed later
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